Monday, February 14, 2005

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by visaeril @ 12:35 [edit] [link]

Okay, addendum to my 'frustrated-at-past-self' letter below:

Here is a perfect example of the sentence structure I used far too often at that point in time: Character does X action, being sure to be X adjective, before doing X other action.

ALL THE TIME. Like, half the sentences in this fic are written like that (occasionally skipping the middle bit.) It's incredibly annoying. Thankfully, I am editing like mad.

edit: my god I used to use a lot of commas. Way way way too many commas. Also I have found a good blog: I Hate My Flatmate.

Also the blog layout has gone from being tables to css and div tags. Because hey, I learned how to use the 'position' attribute and have been having way too much fun with it. No one but me will likely notice a change.

edit edit: I am still editing. Mostly done.

I used 'lent' as past tense of 'lean' (as in to lean against something). Lent. hee hee hee.

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At 1:49 AM, Rilsinify said...

I noticed something, the page loads oddly. Everything but text starts out bunched up at the top of the page, and then moves into place. Never done that before.