Thursday, February 10, 2005

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by visaeril @ 09:02 [edit] [link]

To: Past self
Re: writing

Sweet monkey jesus, past self, you had some really terribly annoying grammar quirks a year ago. Seriously. What the hell is up with all the COMMAS oh god the commas-- Not to /mention/ all the tense changes accompanying the commas.

And while I do thing the flow of these fics is better than my more recent works, that does not make up for all of the agonizingly phrased sentences. WAY TO BE REDUNDANT, PAST SELF.

Also I got your letter and you are a total moron. That'll teach me to leave time capsules around my room. ...Okay, no, it probably won't.

Still.

With love,
XAX

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